Tuesday, November 22, 2005

cold afternoon

breathe baby
i'm this close to losing you
exhale
let yourself be a part of me
closer
trailing my fingers down the side of your arms
mouths collide
i'm open
you can destroy the last thread in me
breathe babe
crush me, i'm not the fighter today
losing you is killing me
breathe girl
all i have is this afternoon

8 comments:

  1. that put a very little smile on my gloomy facethank you for that

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  2. who are you after? make that 'what' -- a metaphor?

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  3. hey! you have put the comments on! thats nice :-)

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  4. okay, i commented earlier in the day, but it never appeared! :-(

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  5. Wow, nice.And comments are back!

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  6. You okay Arjun? No one can write like that unless they felt it in their bones...and if that was just randomly penned down; i'm impressed. As always.

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  7. tat was well writtenr u gloomy...??

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  8. WHAT DID THAT MEAN....KINDLY EXPLAIN!!!

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